11-23-2015, 08:39 AM
Hi, WJ, for me the veal and bloody steak don't jive, maybe T-bone or something else.
I like the addition of S2, it adds to the atmosphere of the place, many first dates. I might break on "checked".
S5 also worked for me, nice edit.
I like the addition of S2, it adds to the atmosphere of the place, many first dates. I might break on "checked".
S5 also worked for me, nice edit.
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