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Skip the Dog

Skip the Dog
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11-13-2015, 04:39 PM
After a breakfast
off to serious business
chasing the squirrel

I think the reader's smart enough to figure out what "chasing the squirrel" implies.
Then also, maybe, realize its double meaning. I'd leave that complexity alone.

Though maybe:

After a breakfast
serious business
chasing the squirrel
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Skip the Dog - by justlikeyou - 10-16-2015, 04:29 AM
RE: Skip the Dog - by billy - 10-16-2015, 06:10 PM
RE: Skip the Dog - by poetix - 11-06-2015, 07:12 PM
RE: Skip the Dog - by onmorie - 11-13-2015, 02:37 PM
RE: Skip the Dog - by rayheinrich - 11-13-2015, 04:39 PM



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