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Jezie

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11-07-2015, 02:41 PM

I really like the changes that you made... This really catches and speaks to me today... The changes made make this poem flow much better and I can relate smoother with the narrator..

Do you have the patience to wait
Till your mud settles and the water is clear?
Can you remain unmoving
Till the right action arises by itself?
~Lao tzu

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Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-12-2015, 07:30 AM

RE: Sometimes - by peacejazzspirit - 09-12-2015, 08:34 AM

RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-12-2015, 08:49 AM

RE: Sometimes - by peacejazzspirit - 09-12-2015, 09:00 AM

RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-13-2015, 02:01 PM

RE: Sometimes - by Jezie - 09-13-2015, 03:05 PM

RE: Sometimes - by Grace - 09-13-2015, 09:49 PM

RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-27-2015, 11:12 AM

RE: Sometimes - by yessiryessum - 09-27-2015, 02:07 PM

RE: Sometimes - by Stateofmind - 10-01-2015, 01:47 PM

RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 10-24-2015, 09:09 AM

RE: Sometimes - by AshleighWood - 10-24-2015, 02:17 PM

RE: Sometimes - by Genuinebloke - 10-25-2015, 07:59 AM

RE: Sometimes - by Jezie - 11-07-2015, 02:41 PM

RE: Sometimes - by Jezie - 11-18-2015, 07:11 AM

RE: Sometimes - by JustSomeRandomWords - 11-29-2015, 06:53 PM

RE: Sometimes - by enigmaticexistence - 12-14-2015, 04:32 PM

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