11-03-2015, 01:47 PM
No idea what this one is about, but I still really like it
I disagree with Tiger about "nothing". I like it as opposed to "void" or another choice, but that being said, exploring your options is always good.
Also really like the line break for the last line.
I don't have much more to say, but I'll definitely be coming back to re-read and wrap my head around your poem. Regardless of my lack of understanding of it, your language is still pleasing as hell.
Thanks for the read,
Cuz
I disagree with Tiger about "nothing". I like it as opposed to "void" or another choice, but that being said, exploring your options is always good.
Also really like the line break for the last line.
I don't have much more to say, but I'll definitely be coming back to re-read and wrap my head around your poem. Regardless of my lack of understanding of it, your language is still pleasing as hell.
Thanks for the read,
Cuz