11-02-2015, 02:33 AM
Hey Mark,
It's been a long while since I've posted on here, but as always, your work is pretty damn good
I think my favorite part is the simple detail of mud bricks
the consonance is great first off "mud making" as well as the enjambment, but also I'm crazy about the image of it.
Brick is a solid image, but imagining bricks of mud brings into question the stability of that wall, how long will it last?/eventually that mud will slip down itself and away. Your piece says something about mortality. Yes the door is gone, but that ain't the only way in, at least that's how I read it.
Maybe my interpretation is bogus but I enjoyed the piece none the less,
Cousin
It's been a long while since I've posted on here, but as always, your work is pretty damn good
I think my favorite part is the simple detail of mud bricks
the consonance is great first off "mud making" as well as the enjambment, but also I'm crazy about the image of it.
Brick is a solid image, but imagining bricks of mud brings into question the stability of that wall, how long will it last?/eventually that mud will slip down itself and away. Your piece says something about mortality. Yes the door is gone, but that ain't the only way in, at least that's how I read it.
Maybe my interpretation is bogus but I enjoyed the piece none the less,
Cousin