10-28-2015, 12:02 PM
I liked the dark turn at the end!
On a minor note I was a bit thrown by the size of the boat / ship / vessel! The beginning said "ship" which makes me think large. The fact that there is a foreman reinforces that. "vessel" is still keeping me thinking its big but then "yacht" makes it suddenly shrink!
On a minor note I was a bit thrown by the size of the boat / ship / vessel! The beginning said "ship" which makes me think large. The fact that there is a foreman reinforces that. "vessel" is still keeping me thinking its big but then "yacht" makes it suddenly shrink!