En Passant in 7/8

[phil194]

I like it; it was short and sweet. I think the first two lines go together beautifully, but I have no idea what the third line is trying to convey - unequally wild? That just might be a bad gap in my vocabulary. Also, I find inconsolable an odd adjective concerning joy. Maybe I am missing what you were trying to say, but un-comforted joy seems redundant. But I think this is a great for a beginning - it definitely has a neat feel to it overall.