En Passant in 7/8
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My first attempt in the open air so I'm really interested in feedback!


En Passant in 7/8

We danced,
An orbital elliptic,
Asymptotically feral,
Yet in time,
The heart meters,
An inconsolable joy.
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En Passant in 7/8 - by AshleighWood - 10-26-2015, 07:06 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by Genuinebloke - 10-26-2015, 07:21 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by AshleighWood - 10-26-2015, 11:39 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by shemthepenman - 10-26-2015, 08:27 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by hlaibo - 10-26-2015, 09:56 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by billy - 10-26-2015, 04:42 PM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by phil194 - 10-27-2015, 01:16 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by QDeathstar - 10-27-2015, 06:35 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by AshleighWood - 10-28-2015, 11:27 AM
RE: En Passant in 7/8 - by QDeathstar - 10-28-2015, 11:56 AM



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