Sometimes

[QDeathstar]

I really like this poem, especially the line "Sometimes I feel." on its own.

In the line: "somewhere between happy-- or maybe just dumb"

I feel like, since you wouldn't say between this OR that, instead this AND that, that might be a change to make it flow better? You could also move the -- and make it:
"somewhere between happy and-- maybe just dumb" 

Just some ideas, hope they're helpful!

thank you for your comment, I'm thinking 'between' is the wrong word....