In 8995 days
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The prophet was a liar.
 
No friends.
Fired 4 times.
Two sexual partners.
One abortion.
Where was the revolution?
Where were the followers?
Full of drive    
but often failing
I deceived myself.
 
Converted two souls to the faith
Now though, an atheist.
An atheist without any friends,
without any admires,
and one abortion.


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No Resolve


No friends.
Two sexual partners.
One abortion.
Crammed of drive,
but empty of accomplishment.
I deceive myself,
but often failing.
The prophet foretold
leading a revolution,
great respect,
and numberless admirers.


Converted two souls to the faith.
Now though, an atheist.
An atheist without any friends
without any admirers
and one abortion.
.
No resolve.








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In 8995 days

No friends.
One abortion.
Two sexual partners.
But full of steadfast drive,
usually.
Desperately deceiving consciousness,
but often failing
in believing that prophecy. 
The prophet prophesied
leading a revolution,
a superabundance of respect,
many admirers,
but most importantly,
Greatness.
Converted two souls to the faith.
Now though, an atheist.
An atheist without any friends
without any admirers
and one abortion.

No resolve.

The prophecy is not true.
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Messages In This Thread
In 8995 days - by elviaje26 - 10-22-2015, 05:36 AM
RE: In 8995 days - by rayheinrich - 10-22-2015, 05:31 PM
RE: In 8995 days - by Genuinebloke - 10-26-2015, 07:03 AM
RE: In 8995 days - by rayheinrich - 10-29-2015, 10:07 PM
RE: In 8995 days - by thepoorfortune - 11-04-2015, 04:11 AM
RE: In 8995 days - by secrecy_unknown - 11-04-2015, 09:27 AM
RE: In 8995 days - by Proze - 11-06-2015, 01:06 PM
RE: In 8995 days - by the man with the spoon - 11-06-2015, 02:01 PM



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