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Skip the Dog

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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10-16-2015, 06:10 PM

off to feels a bit awkward to me, a suggestion would be

After a breakfast
it's serious business
skip chases the squirrel

or

After a breakfast
it's serious business
dog chases the squirrel

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Skip the Dog - by justlikeyou - 10-16-2015, 04:29 AM

RE: Skip the Dog - by billy - 10-16-2015, 06:10 PM

RE: Skip the Dog - by poetix - 11-06-2015, 07:12 PM

RE: Skip the Dog - by onmorie - 11-13-2015, 02:37 PM

RE: Skip the Dog - by rayheinrich - 11-13-2015, 04:39 PM

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