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A Hen Lays
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10-15-2015, 04:03 PM
(10-15-2015, 08:57 AM)justlikeyou Wrote: Completely revised:What does? You're rushing your revisions. Each word, each syllable, each placement, each idea, is crucial. A newcomer to this poem wouldn't have a clue as to what you're talking about.  A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.
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A Hen Lays - by justlikeyou - 10-14-2015, 10:38 PM
RE: A Hen Lays - by just mercedes - 10-15-2015, 06:01 AM
RE: A Hen Lays - by justlikeyou - 10-15-2015, 06:55 AM
RE: A Hen Lays - by tectak - 10-15-2015, 07:37 AM
RE: A Hen Lays - by justlikeyou - 10-15-2015, 08:57 AM
RE: A Hen Lays - by John - 10-15-2015, 04:03 PM
RE: A Hen Lays - by tectak - 10-15-2015, 04:56 PM
RE: A Hen Lays - by justlikeyou - 10-15-2015, 10:14 PM
RE: A Hen Lays - by tectak - 10-16-2015, 04:42 PM
RE: A Hen Lays - by just mercedes - 10-15-2015, 07:05 AM
RE: A Hen Lays - by justlikeyou - 10-15-2015, 07:25 AM
RE: A Hen Lays - by billy - 10-16-2015, 06:15 PM
RE: A Hen Lays - by justlikeyou - 10-16-2015, 09:58 PM
RE: A Hen Lays - by RiverNotch - 10-17-2015, 12:01 AM
RE: A Hen Lays - by justlikeyou - 10-17-2015, 04:20 AM
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