10-11-2015, 04:03 PM
I liked this poem, especially because of its darkness... It took the downtrodden worker into a vengeful one and it works... I agree with everyone's critique so will not be redundant... One piece of advice that was given to me and I will pass on; add a few spaces at the end of the poem so it is seperated from your signature ... It makes for easier reading ...
Do you have the patience to wait
Till your mud settles and the water is clear?
Can you remain unmoving
Till the right action arises by itself?
~Lao tzu
Till your mud settles and the water is clear?
Can you remain unmoving
Till the right action arises by itself?
~Lao tzu