10-07-2015, 07:31 PM
Not gonna get into the whole thing here, but I do think the
"gardener" metaphor is a bit trite (though certainly not as
overused as "shepherd"). And the last line summation
should be omitted. The body of the poem should be
modified to perform this task.
"gardener" metaphor is a bit trite (though certainly not as
overused as "shepherd"). And the last line summation
should be omitted. The body of the poem should be
modified to perform this task.
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?