10-07-2015, 12:03 PM
There's some really awesome emotion behind this piece. I can feel the pain behind it and I love the paradox phrasing, for example "The lack of feeling makes me feel more." I think it brings a lot to the piece and really emphasizes how something is nothing but everything at the same time. I can feel for the narrator and the longing for someone. I think that's what drives this piece, not just longing for something, but there's nothing coming either, you can really feel the demise in the narrators voice/tone.