Junku
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(10-06-2015, 08:41 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(10-06-2015, 08:40 AM)justlikeyou Wrote:  
(03-17-2015, 02:00 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  Slight Edit (thank you to Bella Ella)
preparing three lines
his first fix of the morning -
5-7-5 slave

Original
preparing three lines
his first fix of the morning -
a slave to haiku
What about "addicted to haiku" for the last line? Kinda goes with the "first fix" idea?

    Anyone associating 5-7-5 with haiku shall burn in hell for eternity.
    (Would suggest dropping the "his".)
My bad!  Perhaps then  "-haiku addiction"

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Messages In This Thread
Junku - by Magpie - 03-17-2015, 02:00 AM
RE: Junku - by Tiger the Lion - 03-17-2015, 03:24 AM
RE: Junku - by Magpie - 03-17-2015, 09:17 PM
RE: Junku - by just mercedes - 03-17-2015, 08:06 AM
RE: Junku - by billy - 03-17-2015, 10:34 AM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 03-17-2015, 11:20 PM
RE: Junku - by Magpie - 03-19-2015, 01:52 PM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 03-19-2015, 02:42 PM
RE: Junku - by rayheinrich - 03-19-2015, 05:32 PM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 03-19-2015, 08:16 PM
RE: Junku - by justlikeyou - 10-06-2015, 08:40 AM
RE: Junku - by rayheinrich - 10-06-2015, 08:41 PM
RE: Junku - by justlikeyou - 10-06-2015, 10:06 PM
RE: Junku - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2015, 06:31 PM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 10-06-2015, 09:13 PM
RE: Junku - by RiverNotch - 10-08-2015, 04:42 AM



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