Junku

[ellajam]

Thanks Billy,
I agree with you about the words that should be dropped and I usually would of but I wanted it to be 5-7-5 to emphasize the attention to detail of the misguided addict, although I appreciate that it is difficult to get that across in the poem. Perhaps if I had put the amount of syllables in each line at the end in brackets???

Thanks for reading,

Mark

    Anyone associating 5-7-5 with haiku shall burn in hell for eternity.
    (Would suggest dropping the "his".)

The title works in more than one way. Ignorance is not evil, just like it's not bliss. I should know.