10-06-2015, 08:41 PM
(10-06-2015, 08:40 AM)justlikeyou Wrote:(03-17-2015, 02:00 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: Slight Edit (thank you to Bella Ella)What about "addicted to haiku" for the last line? Kinda goes with the "first fix" idea?
preparing three lines
his first fix of the morning -
5-7-5 slave
Original
preparing three lines
his first fix of the morning -
a slave to haiku
Anyone associating 5-7-5 with haiku shall burn in hell for eternity.
(Would suggest dropping the "his".)
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

