Junku

Junku

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10-06-2015, 08:40 AM

(03-17-2015, 02:00 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: Slight Edit (thank you to Bella Ella)
preparing three lines
his first fix of the morning -
5-7-5 slave

Original
preparing three lines
his first fix of the morning -
a slave to haiku

What about "addicted to haiku" for the last line? Kinda goes with the "first fix" idea?

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