Luckily, Everything is Everything

[hannah.h]

A little confused about what you're trying to convey in the poem. It feels disjointed because the stanzas are so random, which I get is the idea but I think they could be brought together in a more detailed way than "Everything is everything". I like that you incorporated the beginning of the poem into its conclusion, and I thought the closing lines were effective, but the middle could use some revision. The ideas themselves are interesting, their relevance just needs to be developed more, maybe by the addition of a couple more stanzas that build on a few of of the ideas you already introduced. I hope it comes together the way you want and you don't get too overwhelmed by everything being everything!
Good luck,
Hannahr