09-30-2015, 03:10 PM
I enjoyed the sort of rambling rant, the profusion of unrestrained ideas. It needs an over-arching point or resolution. Something that makes you realize at the end that it wasn't just random ideas being spewn about. Or an irony. You definitely made reading easy and enjoyable. It was also a little inconsistent. Sometimes you were economical with your words and sometimes not. Which in itself can not be a flaw if it is intentional and serves a purpose.

