09-30-2015, 10:06 AM
Milo,
Thanks for the feedback. I chose the center justification due to the fact I ignored form, meter, basically all technical aspects in this one. I was hoping the center justification might give it the appearance of structure. Also, due to the lack of structure I put the "Imagine" line in an effort to bring structure as well. The chrome waterless boat was my attempt to describe a hovercar.
This attempt was really half-assed; I'm not gonna lie. I read this article on elevators to the moon and I was so inspired I just started writing and posted without editing. I'll continue editing an post again.
Thanks for the feedback. I chose the center justification due to the fact I ignored form, meter, basically all technical aspects in this one. I was hoping the center justification might give it the appearance of structure. Also, due to the lack of structure I put the "Imagine" line in an effort to bring structure as well. The chrome waterless boat was my attempt to describe a hovercar.
This attempt was really half-assed; I'm not gonna lie. I read this article on elevators to the moon and I was so inspired I just started writing and posted without editing. I'll continue editing an post again.