Elevator to the Moon

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Am I Not
Thanks for the feedback, if you have any questions regarding feedback (like I still do) feel free to check out the thread regarding feedback http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=17758&pid=197561#pid197561
I've also been told a great way to learn about giving feedback is to read others responses in the workshops. Glad you like it though.



Rowens
Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on a edit and post again later.

There was a thread ella posted that compiled some pretty good tips for learning feedback, hopefully she will happen along and post a link to it soon . . .

critique tips (you're welcome. /ella)

And, for my OB feedback (this being a critical forum and all)

I loved the idea of an elevator to the moon - I think the concept is great.  I don't think the execution was as great.  The center justification bothered me from the get go as well as the repeated "imagine if you will"'s.  Also, there was too much nonsense included that I couldn't make sense of at all (chrome waterless boat?)

Anyway, good luck with it.