books and bad ideas (first edit)
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Thank you for all of the advice! I went ahead and scrapped most of the beginnings and rearranged the rest. I also fixed the weird cliche, italicized bits (which I added in about 30 seconds before I posted this, so go figure they wouldn't fit well). I really wanted to hang onto the page numbers because they're a remnant from an older draft of this piece. However, they don't make sense anymore, so I'm trying something a bit different.
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books and bad ideas (first edit) - by alsayn - 09-24-2015, 03:24 PM
RE: books and bad ideas - by ellajam - 09-25-2015, 12:26 AM
RE: books and bad ideas - by peacejazzspirit - 09-25-2015, 11:26 AM
RE: books and bad ideas (first edit) - by alsayn - 09-25-2015, 03:28 PM
RE: books and bad ideas (first edit) - by Jezie - 09-26-2015, 07:28 AM



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