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[Jezie]

I do, and see your point.  There is no way around it,  I am deaf,  but I do need to change it for blind. She is not blind yet but headed that way quickly.  Thanks for pointing that out,  I am sure I would have kept over looking it.  D

Change it to blind? I meant that line should read, "I lack sound while your sight fades." Sorry if I wasn't clear. And sorry to hear about that, my best wishes to her.

As a Czech-German-Texan-American, I return your hug.
(When growing up my close relatives greeted each other
with kisses on the mouth. Male-to-male and any other
combination. Hugs, of course, were a given.)

I really do like how your poem has turned out.
You got some talent there.
Ray

Thank you... Have been shy about sharing... Almost else seems so skilled here
Born in Texas, raised in Germany until 12 and Georgia the rest lol hmm I understand thanks for the hug...