09-18-2015, 01:19 AM
Ah, how enjoyable! I loved reading this! Thank you for sharing.
You write gorgeously. There is at least one typo: "Impressive, [bold]thought[/bold] it doesn’t interest me" - I guess that could be some kind of intentional surrealist addition. I don't know, but I assumed it was a typo.
There are parts where the imagery is a bit lost on me, but it reads so gorgeously anyway, I can't help but enjoy myself.
You write gorgeously. There is at least one typo: "Impressive, [bold]thought[/bold] it doesn’t interest me" - I guess that could be some kind of intentional surrealist addition. I don't know, but I assumed it was a typo.
There are parts where the imagery is a bit lost on me, but it reads so gorgeously anyway, I can't help but enjoy myself.