09-14-2015, 10:31 AM
Hi Jezie, yes that's how you do it, just insert it at the top of the original 
This one does read a bit smoother, progressing well but still needs a little work. I especially like how you snipped the line containing belittle, I like it much better.
This one does read a bit smoother, progressing well but still needs a little work. I especially like how you snipped the line containing belittle, I like it much better.
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