09-13-2015, 02:01 PM
Thanks for your thoughts, the tectak quote is in my signature. I find it amusing. Nothing more.
It was not about my poem. I always had a period there.
"here the comma is a pause as if the narrator is lost in thought, or is taking a moment to attempt to articulate what is being felt"
is what i was going for, but thought a period more approrpiate.
It was not about my poem. I always had a period there.
"here the comma is a pause as if the narrator is lost in thought, or is taking a moment to attempt to articulate what is being felt"
is what i was going for, but thought a period more approrpiate.