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[peacejazzspirit]

you were I am thinking I was not...
Was just agreeing it needs an edit. Question, would it be lacking sound if one experiences sound through touch in the poem though?

That is a good question... touch is the vehicle with which the blind can see and the deaf can hear. The way I interpret it is: the vibrations can not be heard, touch is the means by which they are heard, so I think it would be ok in the poem. Of course it's your poem, and others might have differing viewpoints.
Good luck editing!