09-13-2015, 01:59 AM
(09-13-2015, 01:55 AM)Jezie Wrote: I do, and see your point. There is no way around it, I am deaf, but I do need to change it for blind. She is not blind yet but headed that way quickly. Thanks for pointing that out, I am sure I would have kept over looking it. DChange it to blind? I meant that line should read, "I lack sound while your sight fades." Sorry if I wasn't clear. And sorry to hear about that, my best wishes to her.
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