Sometimes
#4
Ohhh, OK. I don't listen to smashing pumkins, maybe you could put a colon at the end of the preceding line and then put that line from the song in quotations, with an ellipsis at the end that way it is more apparent it is from a song for those who haven't heard it.
Free verse poetry and jazz are like brother and sister.


Messages In This Thread
Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-12-2015, 07:30 AM
RE: Sometimes - by peacejazzspirit - 09-12-2015, 08:34 AM
RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-12-2015, 08:49 AM
RE: Sometimes - by peacejazzspirit - 09-12-2015, 09:00 AM
RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-13-2015, 02:01 PM
RE: Sometimes - by Jezie - 09-13-2015, 03:05 PM
RE: Sometimes - by Grace - 09-13-2015, 09:49 PM
RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 09-27-2015, 11:12 AM
RE: Sometimes - by yessiryessum - 09-27-2015, 02:07 PM
RE: Sometimes - by Stateofmind - 10-01-2015, 01:47 PM
RE: Sometimes - by QDeathstar - 10-24-2015, 09:09 AM
RE: Sometimes - by AshleighWood - 10-24-2015, 02:17 PM
RE: Sometimes - by Genuinebloke - 10-25-2015, 07:59 AM
RE: Sometimes - by Jezie - 11-07-2015, 02:41 PM
RE: Sometimes - by Jezie - 11-18-2015, 07:11 AM
RE: Sometimes - by JustSomeRandomWords - 11-29-2015, 06:53 PM
RE: Sometimes - by enigmaticexistence - 12-14-2015, 04:32 PM



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