Sometimes

[peacejazzspirit]

Hey Q, I like the apprehension of the theme 'sometimes'. Things change, move on, eventually they can come back (if you don't learn from your sast then you're doomed to repeat it ) Some thoughts below:

Sometimes when the leaves turn,
the air cools, the sun fades,
A summer's storm fades to misty drizzle. You used 'fades' in this line and the previous one--substitute another word in one of them.

Sometimes I feel.

Three drinks in and feeling numb
somewhere between empty and simply dumb.
The radio emits more emotion than I can take, I don't see why there is a comma here, as this line and the next don't seem to be compatible when broken up by one.
Sometimes tommorrow really is too long. Tomorrow not tommorrow.

Sometimes you feel the urge to live buried deep below the urge to hide. Love this line.

Some times.