09-09-2015, 01:20 AM
Many thanks for the extra feedback, peeps. I'm going to keep working on this. All comments appreciated.
@billy - the cloud formations are the graceful, silken flicks, but the reference to ice is because they're clouds made of ice particles. I wanted that to tie in with cold heralds in a rarefied realm.
But I'll certainly consider it again.
It's far from finished.
Cheers, all.
@billy - the cloud formations are the graceful, silken flicks, but the reference to ice is because they're clouds made of ice particles. I wanted that to tie in with cold heralds in a rarefied realm.
But I'll certainly consider it again.
It's far from finished. Cheers, all.
A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.