8-31-15

[rayheinrich]

what mad poet Capital W
wrote you
into my life?

Some might disagree with you, but I do not.
I toyed with the question mark so long I forgot that a sentence ought to start with a CAP.
Changed. Thanks.
Paul

Yes, a "?" calls for a "W".  Quite symmetrical.
I just wanted to point out that "what" , being an interrogative, doesn't actually need a "?".

so

what mad poet
wrote you
into my life

works as well. Not sayin' it's better or worse, just sayin'

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i'll be honest at first i looked at this and was like okay? But after a minute i got it. Reminded, me of the messed up individual who got me into this

You're lucky that you have someone to blame.  Either I don't, or I have suppressed it.

Though, thinking a bit, maybe this individual is a fantasy you've constructed in an
attempt to rid yourself of the guilt associated with this endeavor. Again, just sayin'.

    Did I
    write the mad poet
    into my life?

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What mad poet
wrote you
into my life?

Though, looking at your poem again, I find it a bit lacking in the verisimilitude department.
Suggested correction:

What bad poet
wrote you
into my life?