Hairdrier not required

Hairdrier not required

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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08-17-2015, 09:40 AM

no changes here, i like the cut after the first line but did notice it changes completely if the cuts on the 2nd line and a is removed

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seas foam and wash-
mermaid's hair

i do like yours better though

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Hairdrier not required - by John - 08-16-2015, 04:22 AM

RE: Hairdrier not required - by billy - 08-17-2015, 09:40 AM

RE: Hairdrier not required - by just mercedes - 09-15-2015, 07:06 PM

RE: Hairdrier not required - by John - 09-15-2015, 08:58 PM

RE: Hairdrier not required - by Mark A Becker - 09-15-2015, 11:22 PM

RE: Hairdrier not required - by Tiger the Lion - 09-16-2015, 02:09 AM

RE: Hairdrier not required - by John - 09-16-2015, 02:40 AM

RE: Hairdrier not required - by Mark A Becker - 09-16-2015, 03:23 AM

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