Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets
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Smile Metapoetry is such fun, and metasonnets even moreso. Because of your second line, you effectively get away with all inversions and forced rhyme, which is a neat trick. The only time this doesn't come off well is your take/lake rhyme, which is stretching the humour beyond breaking point and a very clear "yep, can't think of anything better here". Love the couplet.

This was a very enjoyable read, thanks John.
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Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-16-2015, 04:29 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by Leanne - 08-17-2015, 04:51 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by billy - 08-17-2015, 08:42 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by ellajam - 08-17-2015, 09:33 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-17-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by Leanne - 08-17-2015, 03:54 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by ThePen - 08-17-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-17-2015, 05:55 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by billy - 08-18-2015, 05:18 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by Sharramon - 08-19-2015, 10:12 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-19-2015, 08:50 PM



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