Elephants

[Jezie]

I always feel odd critiquing anyone... especially if I believe they are more knowledgeable than me. With that said, I liked this poem... well.. in truth because it took me a few reads to fully get it. yet, with so much meaning hidden then to plainly state:
but if I stand alone tonight,
I’m terrified of what I’ll do.
Oddly, these two lines felt weird to me...