Love is like a flower
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I agree with what the others have said about the content---that it is entirely one-sided with the man expressing opinions and endorsing them himself, the woman's point of view not being presented at all. However, read as a poem, I find that it flows easily and the rhyming too is natural and not forced as in many poems. In the penultimate line, instead of 'Loves', the singular 'Love' would perhaps be more appropriate.
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Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 11:06 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 11:53 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 12:12 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by newsclippings - 08-06-2015, 12:15 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by newsclippings - 08-06-2015, 11:54 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 12:35 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 12:15 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 12:27 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by billy - 08-06-2015, 05:28 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 06:57 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by sunilmathur - 08-08-2015, 11:35 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by Jezie - 08-09-2015, 10:54 AM
RE: Love is like a flower (Rev. #2) - by Brownlie - 08-06-2015, 03:02 PM
RE: Love is like a flower (Rev. #2) - by tectak - 08-06-2015, 04:43 PM
RE: Love is like a flower (Rev. #2) - by tectak - 08-06-2015, 06:24 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by tectak - 08-06-2015, 07:16 PM



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