Love is like a flower
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Fine.  No big deal.  I wasn't trying to be "snarky", not my style.  It was hard for me to separate the "narrator" from the "poem", as the narrator of the poem was the essential spirit of this poem.  

I don't know.  I'm not a good critic.  I just say what I like or dislike about form and content.  That's all I know, and that's not much.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself.  I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 11:06 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 11:53 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 12:12 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by newsclippings - 08-06-2015, 12:15 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by newsclippings - 08-06-2015, 11:54 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 12:35 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 12:15 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 12:27 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by billy - 08-06-2015, 05:28 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by joesammsington - 08-06-2015, 06:57 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by sunilmathur - 08-08-2015, 11:35 AM
RE: Love is like a flower - by Jezie - 08-09-2015, 10:54 AM
RE: Love is like a flower (Rev. #2) - by Brownlie - 08-06-2015, 03:02 PM
RE: Love is like a flower (Rev. #2) - by tectak - 08-06-2015, 04:43 PM
RE: Love is like a flower (Rev. #2) - by tectak - 08-06-2015, 06:24 PM
RE: Love is like a flower - by tectak - 08-06-2015, 07:16 PM



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