08-06-2015, 07:43 AM
Just wanted to say I like the edit. 
--Quix
--Quix
(08-06-2015, 02:43 AM)Turtle Wrote: Thanks for the comments. I'm realizing now that many of my "poems" are actually just prose with line breaks. With your critiques and a little clarification on what poetry actually is, I've posted my first edit.
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara