hide and seek by milo
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This is one of my faves on the site.  How you did the passage of time...  So moving to me.  Made me feel such a tender sorrow.  Poems should make you feel more human, I guess.  This one certainly did.  
You can't hate me more than I hate myself.  I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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hide and seek by milo - by Leanne - 11-07-2013, 05:45 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by justcloudy - 11-07-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by Keith - 11-07-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by tigrflye - 11-07-2013, 09:11 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by billy - 11-07-2013, 10:16 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by Todd - 11-07-2013, 09:57 PM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by ChristopherSea - 11-07-2013, 10:02 PM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by milo - 11-07-2013, 11:59 PM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by jdeirmend - 11-08-2013, 07:41 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by milo - 11-10-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by beaufort - 11-17-2013, 08:47 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by milo - 11-18-2013, 01:00 AM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by NobodyNothing - 08-05-2015, 01:49 PM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by milo - 08-06-2015, 01:52 PM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by just mercedes - 08-06-2015, 02:27 PM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by cjchaffin - 08-06-2015, 02:33 PM
RE: hide and seek by milo - by milo - 08-07-2015, 10:41 AM



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