Darkness

[Bunx]

Darkness
is a gift from
those who live their whole lives
not seeing the light that enters
our eyes.

I like the idea of this poem quite alot, I think you could maybe trim it down or reword a word here and there.

ex)
Darkness
is a gift.
Those who live their whole lives
never seeing the light that enters
our eyes.

Really cool sentence with a superb idea behind it, thanks for the post!