08-01-2015, 11:02 AM
Darkness
is a gift from
those who live their whole lives
not seeing the light that enters
our eyes.
I originally posted this in the thread "Poetry Practice Exercises, the Cinquain" but I wanted to know if there is anything I could improve with it, as I like it very much and it holds a personal meaning for me.
is a gift from
those who live their whole lives
not seeing the light that enters
our eyes.
I originally posted this in the thread "Poetry Practice Exercises, the Cinquain" but I wanted to know if there is anything I could improve with it, as I like it very much and it holds a personal meaning for me.
Free verse poetry and jazz are like brother and sister.