Cry of Life

[tectak]

Thank you for taking the time to read through this piece, tectak. Your observations are appreciated and I'll give them keen consideration.

Cheers again.

By the way, what's your cc shorthand - cc, ccc, now ccccc, level 2 cc etc.?

cliche level c=level 1
cliche level cc=level 2

I think you get the drift as this line is level 1 c?  
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best,
tectak

That makes sense. Cheers.