07-29-2015, 07:08 PM
Many thanks for taking the time on this, billy. Appreciated.
The consensus so far, therefore, is to address inverted syntax/rhyme, clarity of narrative, repetition, and clichés. At the same time I'll try and enlarge the positive points on which to hang it all.
Much obliged for your contribution.
The consensus so far, therefore, is to address inverted syntax/rhyme, clarity of narrative, repetition, and clichés. At the same time I'll try and enlarge the positive points on which to hang it all.
Much obliged for your contribution.
A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.