07-27-2015, 02:51 AM
Thanks for that, but actually i think I need to return the compliment because i simply adore the first stanza of your poem this day
I see you in our April morning garden,
barefoot in the dew, the cuffs of your favorite jeans
rolled up exactly twice, revealing all but the sting
of your scorpion ankle tattoo.
So many rich images and just the right amount of suggestion in the scorpion sting line. Lovely.
I see you in our April morning garden,
barefoot in the dew, the cuffs of your favorite jeans
rolled up exactly twice, revealing all but the sting
of your scorpion ankle tattoo.
So many rich images and just the right amount of suggestion in the scorpion sting line. Lovely.

