07-26-2015, 12:42 AM
(07-26-2015, 12:38 AM)cidermaid Wrote:Ah, got ya, peeps still wear a lot of hats here, baseball and stocking types, maybe caps would work better, caps confetti.Quote:Thanks so much, AJ, very helpful. Maybe I can find a subtle circus title to ease the confusion of the first few lines. I liked confetti and was unsure about mass, trying to get away without using masses but I didn't realize confetti has gone the way of tickertape. Maybe shredded paper, thanks for the headsup, I'll think on it.
I'll see what I can do with the one small boy line and the magic spell. Your time and comments are much appreciated.
To clarify meant the hats dated it not the confettiĀ (which i also quite like)...think hat wearing has passed into olden times images.
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Regardless, I'll think on it, thanks.
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