Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1)
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(07-26-2015, 12:38 AM)cidermaid Wrote:  
Quote:Thanks so much, AJ, very helpful. Maybe I can find a subtle circus title to ease the confusion of the first few lines. I liked confetti and was unsure about mass, trying to get away without using masses but I didn't realize confetti has gone the way of tickertape. Maybe shredded paper, thanks for the headsup, I'll think on it.

I'll see what I can do with the one small boy line and the magic spell. Your time and comments are much appreciated. Smile

To clarify meant the hats dated it not the confettiĀ  (which i also quite like)...think hat wearing has passed into olden times images.
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Ah, got ya, peeps still wear a lot of hats here, baseball and stocking types, maybe caps would work better, caps confetti. Smile Regardless, I'll think on it, thanks.
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