England Welcomes Careful Drivers…for Keith

[tectak]

Not sure if you wrote this or it was in an another exercise book, but I'll give it a go.  However, I think the actual reading or interaction with this old piece of writing may be what's really interesting here.  

I think there are some cool lines here. I'm not sure about the rhyming, but it sometimes works (for me) when you use a bunch of feminine endings and then end a stanza on a stressed ending. However, I find the old crumbling exercise book to be intriguing apart from the poem. 

Hi brown,
Yep...I confess, I wrote it.The second poem. Keith said he liked poems about cars. So here is number two. There is a three. It is very bad. But I will post it...pour encourage les autres...thanks for reading and your comments.
Best,
tectak

Tectek,
what better way to admire art than to find out exactly what the author was intending...
So, Is this poem about fitting it to social norms? That's how I took it!
hope to hear from you,
Allysum.Edwards@mymail.nwtc.edu

The most intentional part of this piece was spelling my name correctly The poem was written over 50years ago when I was 11 yo. Social norms? What the hell are they? Rock'?'roll is here. No, then. It is about a precocious young idiot fantasising about driving a car. Better to crit the poem methinks...it's not all about me. Though it is, of course
Best,
tectak