First Year Teaching

[pdvarona]

My one main critique with this poem is the rhyming. Seems very forced at times, I'd suggest writing it over again with the same idea and concept in mind but just letting the verses flow naturally, rather than making it seem like you search through a rhyming dictionary to finish off your lines. The sentiment is there and the idea is understood, you just need to work on the mechanics of rhyming a bit and perhaps the length as well.