Flight
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I like this.  Don't have it in me to do much of a constructive critique.  You understand things poetically.  That's obvious.  

Anyway....welcome.   Wink

(PS> Don't tell me you're like 24 or something.  Then I'll hate you)

(PSS> I haven't interacted with "Todd" on this site,  but he really reads well and gives his best in criticism (which is usually very good).  It's a bit of an honor to get such a thing from him, methinks.)
You can't hate me more than I hate myself.  I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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Messages In This Thread
Flight - by fluorescent.43 - 07-08-2015, 01:01 AM
RE: Flight - by Todd - 07-08-2015, 03:52 AM
RE: Flight - by NobodyNothing - 07-09-2015, 11:24 AM
RE: Flight - by fluorescent.43 - 07-09-2015, 11:47 AM
RE: Flight - by NobodyNothing - 07-09-2015, 11:59 AM
RE: Flight - by billy - 07-09-2015, 05:49 PM
RE: Flight - by fluorescent.43 - 07-11-2015, 11:58 AM
RE: Flight - by ellajam - 07-11-2015, 07:23 PM
RE: Flight - by cidermaid - 07-11-2015, 08:36 PM
RE: Flight - by fluorescent.43 - 07-15-2015, 09:49 PM
RE: Flight - by Todd - 07-15-2015, 10:55 PM
RE: Flight - by fluorescent.43 - 07-16-2015, 01:04 AM
RE: Flight - by fluorescent.43 - 07-26-2015, 02:56 AM



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